What Exactly is Poor Writing?

What Exactly is Poor Writing?Any of you who have editing experience can back me up when I say that it is a very tiring process, especially when the piece you are reviewing is poorly written. And while the perceived quality of writing is subjective, there are a few key indicators that it isn’t just you, that the writing itself is the problem.

Poor writing doesn’t necessarily mean bad spelling and questionable grammar. It can refer to the structure and style as well. When reviewing your work, or that of others, be sure to pay attention to the following things to see if the piece just doesn’t mesh with your preferred style, or if it really does need to be reworked.

Beginnings. Whether it’s a blog post, a short story, or a paragraph of copy, every piece of writing needs to have an opening line at the very least, if not an entire paragraph or even page. How that beginning is crafted can tell you a lot about someone’s writing skills. Weak beginnings cause readers to lose interest immediately, and they act as one of the most important parts of content.

Transitions. Transitions are when you go from one thought to another. They are what leads the reader from the end of one idea to the beginning of another smoothly so that there is a consistent flow to the writing. Poorly written transitions are jarring and they throw the reader out of the content, causing confusion and backtracking.

Syntax. Syntax is a tricky little beast. It’s more of an ingrained skill than one that you can pick up from studying. It’s the proper structure of sentences and words within them, and while it can sometimes be difficult to tell if someone is using proper syntax, there’s no denying when it is being misused. Poor syntax is confusing, jarring, and hard to read. I relate it to trying to swim through molasses.

Vocabulary. Repetition, lack of variety, and a penchant for either over-complicated or under-complicated word choices are all indications that the content isn’t ready for publication. While every writer has a style (that’s how Rowling was found out when she wrote The Casual Vacancy“), refusing to add a little spice to your content by means of a new word once in awhile can give off a feeling of laziness and amateurism.

Reading level. Reading level doesn’t just mean whether your content should be rated R or not. It means what grade level would be able to read the piece without difficulty. If the content is for a YA audience, then the language should match that. Just as there would be a difference between a blog post and an article for a scholarly journal. If the reading level doesn’t suit the audience, they will either lose interest because the content is too simple, or they will become frustrated because it is too hard to understand.

Punctuation. Surprisingly, punctuation can have a slot all of its own. When you see content that is written like this: “the wind HOWLED!! they couldn’t decide whether: to run or to stay in the cave?”, you know it’s not ready. Poor use of punctuation is a good way to see that the writer doesn’t have a grasp on the basics and that they need to do some more learning before they send anything else to someone for review.

Conclusions. Just like beginnings, there are conclusions to everything. Emails, lines of copy, short stories, research papers, and books. They all have endings, and while endings are never the same, and can be crafted from many different styles, how they are written can leave a reader feeling like they wasted their time.

Any one of these on its own can be a small issue that just needs some polishing, but when you combine a few of them into a single writing sample, it’s fairly easy to see that whatever you are reviewing requires some heavy edits.

The good news is that all of these things can be fixed with healthy doses of reading and writing. Often, I find that the best advice to give when handing back poor writing is to tell the writer to read more. Read pieces similar to what you are trying to create and pay attention to how they handled problem areas.

If you have issues with transitions, look at how other writers navigate through them. Pick up tricks and tools from other content before you take to the keyboard again so that you will already know how to fix your bad habits when they rear their heads.

What’s one of your worst writing habits? How did you fix it? Do you find that reading helps to make better writers?

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29 thoughts on “What Exactly is Poor Writing?

  1. I especially like what you say about beginnings. A good beginning is key to keep readers in the story. There have been a couple of times when I’ve almost put down a book I ended up enjoying because the opening felt weak or confusing to me. It’s why I do #FirstLineFriday on my blog every week: I get great practice and feedback on the openings I use, so when I write the stories I know what not to do.

  2. One of my worst writing habits is lack of vocabulary. To fix that, I started reading more and learning new words.

    It did help, a lot. Thanks so much for posting this!

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  4. Great list. There is really no substitute for reading a lot of good writing, and reading it consciously. It’s important to be aware of what makes the writing outstanding. One of my favorite contemporary authors is Karen Russel because her writing is so dynamic. It’s thrilling just to pay attention to her word choice.

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  6. My problem is that for short stories (so far), in the interest of keeping it short, I noticed that I haven’t done very well on settings and description. I have people doing things, but when I put it down a while and come back to the story, I realize that nobody’s going to have a picture about where the character is and what it’s like. Dialogue is bad enough with me, but setting is like the nail in the coffin. I don’t want to do multi-page descriptions and delay the events too much, but I want to help ground the reader in the world. I’m trying to read more short stories and REALLY pay attention to how the great published writers balance it out…I get sucked into the story and forget to take notes. But maybe that just means read it through for enjoyment, then go in for a deeper look. Sorry I’m rambling–tends to happen when I figure something out while typing (oops). Anyhoo, good info to keep in mind (because I know I’m guilty of all of the above at different times). Danke Danke! Hugs.

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